Letter template · Federal agency (OSHA / DOL)
Public comment on OSHA's heat injury and illness prevention rule
Comment template for the federal heat-illness standard, designed to be personalized to the commenter's specific industry, geography, or experience.
Public comments are read and counted. Three to four paragraphs is enough; legalese is not required. The most effective comments are grounded in specific knowledge — a workplace, a region, an industry, an experience. Anonymous comments are accepted but identified ones carry more weight. Submission instructions are at the federal regulations.gov page for the rule.
To OSHA Docket Officer:
I’m submitting this comment in support of OSHA’s proposed Heat Injury and Illness Prevention rule. I’m a [your role/job — worker in [industry], advocate, family member of a worker affected by heat exposure, etc.] in [city/state].
I support the proposed rule because [pick one or more of the following and personalize]:
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The cumulative scientific evidence on heat exposure and worker health is overwhelming. Heat-related injuries and deaths in workplaces — particularly in agriculture, construction, warehousing, food service, and outdoor labor — are documented at scale, and the trends are worsening as climate change extends and intensifies the heat seasons in most US regions.
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I work in [industry] and have direct experience with [heat-related conditions, near-misses, lost-time injuries]. The basic protections in the proposed rule — water access, rest breaks, shade or cooling areas, acclimatization protocols for new workers, and emergency response procedures — are not novel. They reflect what responsible employers already do; the rule would extend the same standard to workers whose employers do not.
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The proposed acclimatization requirement is particularly important. New workers and workers returning from extended absences face elevated risk during the first two weeks; the empirical evidence on this is consistent. Standardizing the acclimatization protocol prevents avoidable injuries.
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The thresholds in the proposed rule — initial heat-trigger at lower thresholds, high-heat-trigger at higher thresholds — are reasonable and reflect substantial scientific input. I support the rule’s tiered structure.
I would urge OSHA to maintain the rule’s protections in the final version against industry pressure to weaken them. Specifically:
- The rule should apply to indoor and outdoor work alike. Indoor heat hazards in warehousing, kitchens, and laundries are documented at scale.
- The rule should not exempt agricultural employers or small-employer categories, which include the workers at highest risk.
- The rule’s enforcement should include meaningful penalties for repeat violators.
- The rule should not exclude exposure thresholds based on lower-than-actual humidity assumptions.
Thank you for the opportunity to comment.
[Your name] [Your city, state] [Your industry/role, optional]